Just saying, you should put more information and detail into your application, rather than roughly ten words, it'll help develop your character more, along with supply the reader with better information and a more fun read, as it does seem almost... postwhore-ish with these very small entries. You should also try and use some sort of format, design, etc., to make it more pleasing to the eye. Just some suggestions, I'm not forcing you to do any of these things.