This isn't fair.

[Scratchie]

My app might get denied.. I have a good feeling about it..

I'm not trying to make to make it long though, I'm trying to make a good application that reflects how brain washed my character is.. I also try to put my RP exsperiences in it. This is to RTLK or whomever handles apps these days, reconsider if you believe it's to short, I put work into it to put as much as my characters personallity in it. I put as much of my character's soul into it.. It wasnt meant to be OMFG WALL OF TEXT but meant to be a reall application were you can feel as though a real person, not me, wrote it. Whom seems to be actually from HL2.

Your's is under review, checking a few things and want to make sure of a few things that I think before I accept or deny yours.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character?
Once I get accepted I excpect to be dealt with strictly and learn fast. I excpect to have a lot of responsibility put on my characters shoulders. Going around patrolling the streets and looking for any sort of resistance. Going on missions with other units.

I excpect to be keeping the safety of many citizens lives and respecting the authoraty given to me and my character.  I also assume that there will be a lot expected of me at first, and I am completely fine with that.

^ That might be part of the reason. You've turned what should be one sentence into four, to meet the standard "4 SENTENCE = 1 PARAGRAPH" structure. The second part is only 2 sentences, and the first is 2 at most.

You need to put in some effort. CCA isn't just to be given out to everyone. Also, spell check it. It'll make you appear more mature and suitable for the rank, even if you are not (No, I'm not calling you immature).

That was the exact reason.

[Pielolz]

My app might get denied.. I have a good feeling about it..

I'm not trying to make to make it long though, I'm trying to make a good application that reflects how brain washed my character is.. I also try to put my RP exsperiences in it. This is to RTLK or whomever handles apps these days, reconsider if you believe it's to short, I put work into it to put as much as my characters personallity in it. I put as much of my character's soul into it.. It wasnt meant to be OMFG WALL OF TEXT but meant to be a reall application were you can feel as though a real person, not me, wrote it. Whom seems to be actually from HL2.

Your's is under review, checking a few things and want to make sure of a few things that I think before I accept or deny yours.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character?
Once I get accepted I excpect to be dealt with strictly and learn fast. I excpect to have a lot of responsibility put on my characters shoulders. Going around patrolling the streets and looking for any sort of resistance. Going on missions with other units.

I excpect to be keeping the safety of many citizens lives and respecting the authoraty given to me and my character.  I also assume that there will be a lot expected of me at first, and I am completely fine with that.

^ That might be part of the reason. You've turned what should be one sentence into four, to meet the standard "4 SENTENCE = 1 PARAGRAPH" structure. The second part is only 2 sentences, and the first is 2 at most.

You need to put in some effort. CCA isn't just to be given out to everyone. Also, spell check it. It'll make you appear more mature and suitable for the rank, even if you are not (No, I'm not calling you immature).

That was the exact reason.

Thank you for the concideration, RTLK, I have exsperience but I doubt that matters.. I really tried to flesh out the brain washing drugs of the food and water which brings devote loyalty..

[Scratchie]

Thank you for the concideration, RTLK, I have exsperience but I doubt that matters.. I really tried to flesh out the brain washing drugs of the food and water which brings devote loyalty..

The biggest thing right now is getting the entire story straight about your old CCA.

[Pielolz]

Thank you for the concideration, RTLK, I have exsperience but I doubt that matters.. I really tried to flesh out the brain washing drugs of the food and water which brings devote loyalty..

The biggest thing right now is getting the entire story straight about your old CCA.

What do you mean? If you have any questions just PM them to me and I'll answer ASAP.

[Swoots]

Crying about it will just make things worse.

[Pielolz]

Thank you for the concideration, RTLK, I have exsperience but I doubt that matters.. I really tried to flesh out the brain washing drugs of the food and water which brings devote loyalty..

The biggest thing right now is getting the entire story straight about your old CCA.

What happened:

I was patroling, a citizen punches me and rubs into the CCH, I wait for him, he runs out, I kill him, get a black mark from Tittles.

Second: Good reason I wont bitch about it.

Third: No reason, I was never told why, just brought into the Nexus and amputated.