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[DENIED] Jane Freeman's Civil Authority Application
« on: March 31, 2012, 10:05:35 PM »
Jane Freeman's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Jane Freeman

IC Character Name: Jane Freeman

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
I think my character should be able to join CCA because Jane Freeman knows a lot about Law Enforcement. She reads books,and always watches CCA doing their duty.

The reason why Jane wanted to be a Combine was because her best friend died by being attacked by rebles. When Jane heard about it from Wallace Breen she moved to City 45 and started a new life there. When Jane Freeman moved their she made a commited her self to be a part of the CCA.

She wishes to be a CCA because she doesen't want anything to happen to what she heard about her best friend. Jane always wanted to be a Combine when she was very young but Gordon Freeman changed her mind and diden't want to be a CCA.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Jane Freeman is lawful and trustworthy. Jane Freeman always followed the Laws and always did what her parents told her to do. When a Combine came to her and told her to leave she did so and left and went to a different area.  She never went to jail for robbery,but the only time she did was to tell info. about the Lamba movement, which she told.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
I am expecting is a very nice team to work with and people who would care for their own team.  I am also expecting a team of people who do not abuse there powers and just have fun being a combine and not taking it too suriously where they devote their life to CCA. I am also expecting for a safe experience of being CCA and not being RDM'ed when I walk around.

Jane Freeman is expecting for a safe experience and is hoping to do the same as her best friend enjoy being a CCA and doing her job at the same time. Jane Freeman is also hoping for a safe staff who she can talk to with her troubles. Jane is also hoping for some tough work to do every once in a while too.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Jane Freeman was a young lady when she found out her brother Gordon Freeman was a rebel. When she heard about it she asked her mom if it was true and her mom shook her head yes. She always begged Gordon to be her c+itizen brother and not a rebel. When Gordon shook his head no and left off she started crying. After that she meet a friend who turned out to be her best friend. Her best friend was actually a member of CCA and she taught Jane how to be a Combine. She taught her to use a stunstick, how to tell the difference between citizens and rebels, and more. But when her best friend died by a wild shooting near the Citadel in City 17 she moved to City 18. City 18 wasn't so bad but people from the Lamba movement started to raid. Jane diden't like it so she took another train to City 45. Jane liked it and so she made some new friends and started to enjoy life more. Jane is now living in City 45 in peace and hopes to stay in peace for a long time.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No. I never been in CCA on CG


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
Since July 2011

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
Since August 2011

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
Off and On Since December 2011

4. What Time zone are you in?
-5 EST

5. In what country do you live?
United States

6. How old are you?
11

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
My most memorable RP experience was being a admin on a new BuildRP server. I though man I was a boss on this server. I am still currently a admin on the server too.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes.



IC Section

Full Name: Jane Freeman
CID: 57790
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Height: 5 Foot 6 Inches
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Blue
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 250
Mental Distinctions: N/A
Mental Defects: N/A
Mental Advantages: Reading Books Makes Her Smart.
Notable Qualities: N/A


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No. I don't even know what it is so I have to think it is bad and I don't actually know if it is good or bad.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
No,I never make it in time

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes, I would.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes I do. I swear under the mighty power of Wallace Breen.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
I will remain loyal and faithful.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I want to join CCA because I think it would be fun to be a Civil Protection officer since I never been one. I always had a weird thing to be a Combine for halloween. I also want to join CCA just to see how being a CP officer would be, Like to see how it feels to be keep society in order and making sure nothing wrong happens.



Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Jane Freeman hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
« Last Edit: April 01, 2012, 07:19:05 AM by Jogzi »

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Re: Jane Freeman's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2012, 02:11:00 AM »
UNIT: 604
DIVISION: GRID
CLEARANCE: OfC
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

Connecting to Network
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CONNECTION ESTABLISHED

Applicant File Opened: <Jane Freeman>
Citizen Identification Number: 57790

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements.  Application fails to follow proper grammar requirements.  Application questions 1, 2, 3 and 4 do not meet minimum standards. Applicant does not seem to take the process seriously. Applicant does not meet minimum prerequisites for applying.

Character backstory fails to meet standards - 'Jane Freeman' may not be Gordon Freeman's brother, as he is a canon character. Additionally, the backstory does not detail Jane's life, merely reveal her motivation for joining the Combine Civil Authority.
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Saving Record...
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File Saved

Disconnecting <CCA.C45.GRID-OfC.604>
Console Shut Down.
CONNECTION LOST
C45.CCA.GRID-DvL.604 - Healthy - Executing citizens. Tally: 4
John Gatsby - Healthy - Celebrating, having detonated an explosive melon in front of two CA's

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Ernest Cumberbatch, Port Royal, Governor. Governing.
John Gatsby, of the brigantine Brimstone. Amputating Limbs

 

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