Author Topic: Janey Johnson's Authorization Application  (Read 2998 times)

Janey Johnson's Authorization Application
« on: January 21, 2012, 06:29:15 PM »
Player Section

Steam Name: Gordon Freeman
Age: 16
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): A year (Fallout, Gmod, Skyrim)
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: A year

Character Section

Authorization(s):
A thats not resistance but, A vest that has a + like a clinic symbol, Something that looks Black,Has small pockets Something that could hold a small pistol, It could probally hold something small then a pistol, The vest has like four pockets two on each side, The + symbol is in the corner, Mostly on the shoulder part.

Name: Janey Johnson
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Affiliation: None

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Found It dugged up with a small peice of it showing, Janey sees it, She pulls it out, The Vest is dirty but has a Clear + on it. She cleans it off with water, The vest looks clearer, She decides to keep it, Maybe It could be useful.

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
Extra space (small amount of bag space), Extra armor (small amount).

Defects
Cant run (Too heavy).

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Just to wear around to show I'm more protected, It makes more like im tough.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
No.

Which server does this apply for?
Outlands

Extra Notes (optional):

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Re: Janey Johnson's Authorization Application
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2012, 07:56:28 PM »
 Not that I am a admin or anything, sorry for posting. You need to edit this alittle more, use some examples from other peoples forums. Make a detailed story also and put some more into other sections aswell.

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Re: Janey Johnson's Authorization Application
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2012, 12:41:15 AM »
Also just a note here. Vests cannot be obtained anymore rofl said so and also it would be impossible to find a vest like that. It woulda been found by refuges in such a short time also,  just to let you know the back story is lacking so much detail.
I am ded not big surprise.

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Re: Janey Johnson's Authorization Application
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2012, 04:00:13 AM »
Also just a note here. Vests cannot be obtained anymore rofl said so and also it would be impossible to find a vest like that. It woulda been found by refuges in such a short time also,  just to let you know the back story is lacking so much detail.

This.

Even if you could obtain resistance vests now, this would be denied due to lack of detail and such.

Denied.
« Last Edit: June 03, 2012, 03:48:59 AM by Kom??Як »
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