Doing really well so far, however I have a few suggestions. ^_^
Could really improve by adding some faceposing, also sacrificing some computer-life for a few minutes to add a little more anti-aliasing if possible. And finally, HDR and editing for lights, FOV, etc, could really improve the quality and what you want the picture to focus on.
5% warning for necro posting. Previous post before this one was on 02-04-2012
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