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[DENIED]Albert Jone's Civil Authority Application
« on: April 01, 2012, 12:39:27 PM »
Albert Jone's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: [LL] Cpl. Panasiuk

IC Character Name: Albert Jone

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
My character would like to join the CCA mainly because he is a loyalist that wants a job. (Other than cleaning up trash and being a CWU worker.) He also wishes to join it because he wants to invent new things for the U.U (Grid). He thinks that his inventions will be very useful to the CCA and U.U.

He also thinks that the new government that the UU installed is better than democracy. He thinks this because his idea of democracy is that the poor get poorer and the rich get richer. So he would like to become a CP so he can enforce this government. Also he thanks the U.U for sparring his brother and parents.

He hates criminals and anti-citizens that don't obey the law because he likes the world to be an orderly place. Also he will actually do his job unlike some CCA members he sees. //No really the CCA aren’t doing their job, one time this woman ran up the steps and A. 2 CPs on the balcony saw her and B. An ofc that was going in saw her, and they didn't do anything.\\ He feels like he will be very good at this job.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Law-abiding, Trustworthy, Smart, Kind, Happy, Hyper, Curious, Responsible, Fast and loyal.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
I had a CCA before on CG, he got removed for F***ing up. This time I will not Fuck-up, as I have learned from my mistakes in the CCA. I will do my best to RP to the best of my ability. Also I hope I get accepted because the CCA was fun as hell.

Albert Jone Has studied the CCA units and he has learned how the CCA ranks work. He also found out that Rcts cannot patrol alone and he saw some units get treated badly from their superiors. He prepared to be a Rct and get treated badly from higher ranks. He will do anything he can to enforce the U.U's law.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
As an early child Albert Jone liked his family and the school he went to, He had many friends and liked his teacher he always wonder how things work one day he found a pen. He noticed it looked a little like a water bottle with those screw off caps // You know like on a water bottle there are little ridges that the caps screws on?\\ He started to twist it and... It pops off! He takes apart the whole thing and he is very proud of himself
He tries to put it back together. It seems right, he clicks the button and...Pop! The pen comes out. Yay! he thinks.

As a teenager Albert decided to study physics and engineering. He had 2 white friends, John and Mark one day in 8th grade...

"Holy shit. You guys hear what’s going on?"Asked John, Albert and Mark replied by saying "No, What?" "Okay you know Jimmy right?" "The nerd? Yeah…What about him?" Asked Albert "He's getting all the chicks!" Albert and Mark both laughed. Mark asked "Surely you can't be serious?" John replied by saying "See that's what I was going to say, there are a lot of rumors about and I want to find out if they are true!" "Perfect..." Said Mark "What?" Asked Albert in a curious voice "See I always watch spy movies and so I made my own spy kit and tactics I wanted to test em' out one day.. And guess what? Today's the day..."
Later at 4:17 PM
"Alright glad you could make it guys" Mark said on the hill overlooking Jimmy's house. "Since this is a white neighborhood Albert can't be the eavesdropper, it’ll be too obvious, so you will be watching from this hill. John you look over on that hill" Mark pointed towards another hill opposite of the one they are on. "Take these binoculars, radio, watch and compass I'll will tail and eavesdrop him. You guys tell me where he's heading." He looked at his watch. "Shit it's almost 7:30 come on John get to the Hill I'll get down there." They both ran leaving Albert on the hill after about 2 minutes Albert heard on the radio "I'm on the hill" Followed shortly by "Okay I'm on the street, hiding behind some trash cans." Albert saw Mark on the street and John on the hill, so he said "I see you guys" "Alright I see Jimmy coming back from lunch" Said John's voice over the radio. Albert responded by saying " Yeah I see him t-Wait who the hell... Is that?" "John finished his sentence for him by saying "Samantha!??!" Mark's voice came on the radio "Yeah their talking about the prom... Alright we got what need to know... Rally at the Burger king.”
14 minutes later
Albert casually walked into the Burger joint ordered 3 Burger meals then sat down, John walked in and say Albert, and sat next to him, Mark came 1 minute later and did the same. The cashier yelled out "Number 56!" "That's me" said Albert. He walked up to the counter and took the food he walked back to his table and gave a burger meal to each of them. "Thanks" They both said "Well we found out what we needed..."Said Albert

17 Years later
Over the years Albert got PhD in Physics and got a job as an engineer in a factory maintaining the machines in the factory... Then the portal storms came, no one knew what they were. Then the combine came Albert was scared and followed the governments orders, but then the combine came and found Albert's hiding place. Albert woke up with bruise on his head and one of the aliens asking him questions "Hello" "Name?" said the alien "Albert Jone" Said Albert nervously “Okay your C.I.D is 22022, remember that." Albert was then transported to City 45; He liked it there so he helped the combine by picking up trash and reporting crimes. One day he decided to join the CCA so here he is now.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
Yes I had 518 who was removed cause of my grammar and RP


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
3 years

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
7 months

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
7 months

4. What Time zone are you in?
Mountain Time zone (Arizona)

5. In what country do you live?
United States

6. How old are you?
12

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
It was the big S6 sweep that all the CCA units did; I thought it was pretty humorous when the DvL got shot.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes



IC Section

Full Name: Albert Jone
CID: 22022
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Height: 6'1
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Hazel
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 180
Mental Distinctions: None
Mental Defects: None
Mental Advantages: None
Notable Qualities: Fast runner


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I want to join the Combine Civil Authority because I want to enforce the government that the UU has installed. And I hope that I can invent new things for the UU to use.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Albert Jone hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.

Edit: fixed some spelling and grammar mistakes
« Last Edit: April 11, 2012, 03:25:13 AM by KillmePlz »
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Re: Albert Jone's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2012, 06:28:47 PM »
UNIT: 604
DIVISION: VICE
CLEARANCE: OfC
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

Connecting to Network
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CONNECTION ESTABLISHED

Applicant File Opened: <Albert Jone>
Citizen Identification Number: 22022

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements.  Application fails to follow proper grammar requirements.  Application question 1 does not meet minimum standards. Given the fact that the play has already had a unit removed, the application isn't nearly good enough. ||::>

Saving Record...
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Disconnecting <CCA.C45.VICE-OfC.604>
Console Shut Down.
CONNECTION LOST
C45.CCA.GRID-DvL.604 - Healthy - Executing citizens. Tally: 4
John Gatsby - Healthy - Celebrating, having detonated an explosive melon in front of two CA's

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