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[DENIED] Jimmy Cruz's Civil Authority Application
« on: February 23, 2012, 10:51:57 PM »
Jimmy Cruz's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: MOOcow

IC Character Name: Jimmy Cruz

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
My character, Jimmy, wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority because he has always seen the incredible control the Combine have over earthlings. He has always respected the authority of the Combine. He knows the humans can never win, why not put an end to this useless violence when it is obvious that the Combine are the more powerful of the two forces. When he sees a citizen being punished for disrespect towards the Overwatch, he smiles a bit because of the incredible authority of the Combine.

He is very intrigued by the Combine's technology. He knows and always will respect the intelligence of the Combine. He knows that the humans would never be able to match the incredible technological advantages of the Combine. A prime example are the Manhacks. Jimmy knows that humans could never think of something so deadly and efficient. He sees the big advantage the Combine have over humans and that is fast and efficient transport. Combine attack helicopters are nearly invulnerable.

My character was led towards the path of the Combine when he saw a man being punished by the Combine. He feels that with the Combine's power and technology, he could keep the ignorant citizens in line. It is obvious to him that the Combine's way is the correct way, better for Earth, better for humanity. The incredible control the Combine have over ignorant citizens has intrigued Jimmy greatly.

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Very trustworthy, loyal, slightly paranoid, and a little nervous.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
The Combine Civil Authority experience will be very beneficial for me because it will help me learn how to be a better role-player. I have learned a lot from CG's HL2Rp server, so much intact that I have even taught a bit to newer players. The CCA will be a great learning opportunity. I would love to learn from other Combine, for many of them have a lot of experience.

The Combine Civil Authority will be very beneficial for my character because he gets to learn about Combine technology, which he is very interested in. He will also learn many crowd-control and citizen handling techniques. He will get a taste of power for once. He will learn discipline and earn a greater respect for his superiors. He will get a taste of being on top. Helping a cause he believes in. I believe he will prosper in the CCA.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Jimmy Cruz was born on January 11, 1995. He was born in a small town in Tennessee. He was born into an average middle-class family.
In 1998, his younger brother was born. They got along well and didn't have many problems with each other.
When Jimmy was 5 years old, he began school. He made a few friends and wasn't very outgoing.
He had a fairly average childhood. He enjoyed video games, music and movies, just as most every other kid.
Although, when he was 15, he began seeing odd "electric clouds." The news channels called them "Portal Storms" and they were warned to stay indoors, but Jimmy didn't care, he was more interested than worried. The Portal Storms never effected his town directly, but his family was very, very worried. His parents forbade him to leave the house, and when videos were being shown on television of the strange creatures arriving from the storms, the Cruz family was terrified, but Jimmy wanted to know more.
When the military began moving people into secured cities, Jimmy went without a word. But whenever he got the chance, he would stand on the tallest building in City 11 and look out over the land. He imagined meeting the creatures and studying them. He paid no attention to the Combine takeover or anything but the land outside the cities. He was so interested in what lays ahead, he didn't even notice when he could no longer find his family. He didn't care anymore.
And again, when they were moved to City 45 in 2016, Jimmy went without a word.
On arrival, Jimmy did not like this new city. He soon found out that he could not make it to the rooftops of any of the buildings. So, he began focusing on other things. He noticed the rise of the Combine Overwatch. He noticed their superior technology and power. He instantly wanted to be a part of it and learn what how they did what they did. He began performing tasks for the combine to prove his loyalty. He knew that the chores weren't going to help anyone in the long run, but he knew that he needed their trust, that he was loyal.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No, I have never had one.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
About a year.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
About 2 months.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
About 6 months.

4. What Time zone are you in?
Central

5. In what country do you live?
USA

6. How old are you?
15

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
Jimmy was carrying out a chore for the Combine Overwatch as he was used to doing, when all of the sudden, a shimmering figure came walking through the square. It had the shape of a vortiguant. The vortigaunt came in and interacted with the combine.
This was a great experience for me and my character because my character had always been longing for at least a glimpse of the creatures he had been longing to see since the beginning of the Portal Storms.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes, I do.



IC Section

Full Name: Jimmy Cruz
CID: 59404
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 5'7"
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Brown
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 140
Mental Distinctions: A little paranoid, a little suspicious of people.
Mental Defects: Paranoid of untrusted people.
Mental Advantages: Notices small things.
Notable Qualities: Good listener, notices small things.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No, my record is clean.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, every chance I get.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes, I do.

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes, I do.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes, I will.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
My character has been interested in the Combine, their plans, actions and technology since their invasion.
This will be a great opportunity for him.
For me, this will be an excellent learning experience.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Jimmy Cruz hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.

Reason for Edit: Fixed 1 grammatical error.
« Last Edit: February 24, 2012, 10:25:40 PM by Kom??Як »

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Re: Jimmy Cruz's Civil Authority Application
« Reply #1 on: February 24, 2012, 10:25:15 PM »
UNIT: 563
DIVISION: UNIFORM
CLEARANCE: Officer
Enter Password: *******

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Applicant File Opened: <Jimmy Cruz>
Citizen Identification Number: 59404

Acceptance status:
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Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements. Application question 4 does not meet minimum standards. ||::>

Extra Notes:
(OOC): Question 4 is not detailed enough, you basicly made a list, instead of a detailed backstory of your characters life. Also there's something lacking in this application, the HL2 canon details bother me, so I would also suggest revising it and using the OverWiki for reference.

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