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Hala'Moken's Authorization Application
« on: December 06, 2011, 09:47:20 AM »
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Steam Name: Gunnerstrip7
Age: 16
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): Three years(four as of next January)
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: Three years(was my first type of roleplay)

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Authorization(s):
A Vortigaunt Refugee on the Outlands server.

Name: Hala'Moken
Age: 87
Gender: Male
Affiliation: None

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
Hala'Moken stumbled into the Outlands after what seemed like days of running, hiding, and some fighting in the beginning.  He waded his way through the sludge of the sewer system, and couldn't help but notice there was a lack of the humans and his kin down there. To him it seemed strange, why wouldn't more of the humans and his kin have escaped by now? All these questions made him think back to the beginning of the predicament he was in. He thought about how his home world had been invaded by a strange group of creatures who were very powerful. They enslaved all of his kin, and killed any that resisted.

At that time things seemed to only get worse for Hala'Moken and his kin, as they were forced onto a planet known as Xen where they found it extremely hard to survive in the new ecosystem.. Eventually rifts started opening up, and the Nihilanth saw this as a chance of escape. Everyone, including Hala'Moken was sent down to invade the new planet known as Earth. Hala'Moken and most of his Kin that didn't teleport directly into places like Black Mesa didn't see much fighting, so they had time to learn the flora of the planet. After the Seven Hour War when the Combine began creating Conscripts, Hala'Moken was quickly found and sent to City 26 as a Conscript.

While a Conscript he knew very little English, but began to pick up on the strange language as more and more of it was spoken around him. He began to speak it well, but didn't find much use in it, as he was either stuck in the Nexus, or under guard when cleaning. Eventually some citizen rebels that had managed to acquire metal rods and other items started to fight the guards. They took out Hala'Moken's guard and he managed to get freed from the metal neck brace that kept him docile to the combine. Him and the humans escaped the City, the humans had broken off to try and establish some kind of refugee system, while Hala'Moken continued on.  After Hala'Moken finished his reminiscing he found himself next to a ladder, he climbed it and set his feet on the grass. He heard a combine chopper, "Not looking for the Hala'Moken, but the humans." Hala'Moken said to himself as he took off into a building, he felt that while he had escaped captivity, it would be a long road to true freedom.

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
Can speak fluent Vortigese
Can Use the Vortessence
Can speak decent English

Defects
Major target of the Overwatch
Over-usage of the Vortessence can cause him exhaustion
Refers to himself in third person and his English is confusing to some humans.

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
I plan  to give more RP to the Outlands server as I don't see many people on and definitely not many Vortigaunts. I hope to be a sort of IC mentor to people, giving them retribution when their mind seems lost in insanity or in a predicament, but is not completely lost.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))
N/A

Which server does this apply for?
Outlands

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Re: Hala'Moken's Authorization Application
« Reply #1 on: December 12, 2011, 09:02:14 PM »
Denied. The story behind your character's journey from Xen to Earth, as well as the rebellion that set your character free requires a lot more detail and elaboration.

 

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