[DENIED] Cindy Whitmore\'s Civil Authority Application

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Cindy Whitmore's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Epic Panda

IC Character Name: Cindy Whitmore

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
 Cindy was just like the normal City 45 citizen. She would wake up, (Most of the time she would not sleep from raids, lock-downs, ect.) eat a leftover ration, sit outside and watch life go past. Basically the lather, rinse, repeat routine. After she had seen the raids, lock-downs, fights, and sometimes killing for a few weeks she was a spectator of the events.

 After a while it got tiring, she began to watch out her apartment window at the raiding, fighting, and shooting. She got tired of it, she didn't have much heart for some of the CP's but she had to deal with it. As long as she was alive she had to take the 'Civil Protection' for granite. As long as the Civil Protection kept her alive.

 One day she was walking into a shop and tripped a robber that was running out of the store. The CP got there in time to get the 'robber' or as they called them rebels on the ground. The officer granted her a point. Cindy was questionable and she asked what these points do. He explained it to her and she started off to get 4 more of these points. She eventually got 4 more points and she thought back on if she should become apart of the Civil Protection or not. She was only told the good part about being a CP so without thinking twice about the consequences she started off to make a application to join the CCA.


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Cindy is :

Pure- She will always follow orders and make sure they are carried out.

Cooperative- She will successfully work with any teammate without complaining.

Trustworthy- She is to sure carry out orders and make sure they are done correct.

Brave- She will push her fears away from a fight till she is successful.

Lawful- She will always make sure she does her job but also follow the rules.

Polite- She will respect her higher command.

Obedient- She will follow the rules and listen to objectives without complaining.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
 I expect the CCA to be a fun/scary roll in Role Playing. I expect it to be hard (That's because I lag sometimes) and a adventerous experience. I expect it to be exciting, it will definitely be a memorial achivement in Role Playing. I also expect the CCA training a lot different than regular citizen activities.

 For Cindy she expects the CCA to be fun and beneficial. But what she hasn't realized is that it will be hard for her. All the way from training to her ending she will have to endure hard assignments. The CCA wont be as easy as a cake walk for her. The only thing she expects hard is patrolling and multitasking, also raids.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
                                                                             -CHILDHOOD-
 Cindy Whitmore was 5 when she got into kindergarden, she was so smart they made Cindy skip to kindergarden. Cindy was fascinated with books and machinery. She had read 4 learn-to-read book by herself when she was 2. By the time Cindy was 4 she had a huge vocabulary and vast knowledge about machinery and nature. Cindy was a very smart kid. Her parents were constantly bragging about Cindy and her smarts. About the age 11 she was in middle school and was repeatedly got A+ on each report card.

   
                                                                            -TEENAGE'HOOD'-
 By the time Cindy was 16 and she was still very smart but also she was stronger and braver. Her first fight was when she was 17, she was walking through the outside basketball court and bumped into another girl. The girl fell and went ballistic on one little scratch. As the two teens fought the loud heel clomps came around the corner, both battle-worn teens had encountered the principal in front of them. For the first time Cindy had brought shame upon the family. Cindy was suspended, each day Cindy was suspension went by, Cindy would sneak out of her room and talk to her friends through the gate surrounding the 'court' yard. The fight was brutal so only a mere couple of cameras were placed around the school.


                                                                           -ADULT'HOOD'-
 Cindy Whitmore was now 21, as time went on Cindy was knocked out with a piece of rubble beside her head. There was a lump on her head. As the 7 Hour War raged on Cindy was out cold. It was a long time before she woke up. She was surrounded by masked men named Civil Protection, they gave her a blue jumpsuit, a CID number, and a escort to a train. As she was being transported to City 45 she wondered what it looked like and how long was she out.


                                                                             -PRESENT-
 Cindy Whitmore arrived at City 45. She walked past the masked men watching her. She quickly got out, got a apartment, and pieced back her thoughts one by one. As she finished a broadcast came on with a ladyish voice that announced rations. Cindy got her rations and when everyone was in front of the nexus, a huge building that was made by  the combine, the black screen on the nexus had shown a man. The man had greeted everyone. Once it was over everyone went on with they'er normal lives. The robot looking masked men searched some people for reasons Cindy coulden't understand and some were taken into the nexus. After a while Cindy slept, woke up, and repeated the same routine.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No, I have not.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
About 2 to 4 years so I'd say 3

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
About 2 years.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
2 years

4. What Time zone are you in?
U.S. Central Time Zone

5. In what country do you live?
United States

6. How old are you?
11

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
I remember playing Outlands and I spotted a scanner so we kept shoot/throwing rocks at it till it went down, then we took it apart and made a computer out of it. Well I did.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes, I do.


IC Section

Full Name: Cindy Whitmore
CID: 34700
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Height: 6'2
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Blue
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 135
Mental Distinctions: Quick strategizing, remains calm.
Mental Defects: SD- Spatial Disorder.
Mental Advantages: Thinks quickly.
Notable Qualities: Intelligent.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
Yes, once, because I found a empty ammo box and was questioned about it.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, I do eat the supplied water and food from the CCA.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes, I am willing to risk/give my life to the Universal Union

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes, I do accept that all action preformed by me are under my responsibility.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes, I will always remain loyal to the Universal Union.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I, Cindy Whitmore wish to join the CCA to help ensure safety among the loyaltist and citizens. I also wish to serve and protect the Universal Union.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Cindy Whitmore hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.

Post Auto-Merged: July 21, 2012, 06:12:23 PM[Edit] I edited question number 2 to give examples of what she will do.

[Arthas Tyrell]

Question 1, Paragraph 2, Missing a sentence.
Question 2, Two traits are missing descriptions (Doesn't go with the other traits, as they have descriptions.)
 Otherwise Application seems fine.

[smt]

Question 1, Paragraph 2, Missing a sentence.
Question 2, Two traits are missing descriptions (Doesn't go with the other traits, as they have descriptions.)
 Otherwise Application seems fine.

what are you doing

[raged]

Question 1, Paragraph 2, Missing a sentence.
Question 2, Two traits are missing descriptions (Doesn't go with the other traits, as they have descriptions.)
 Otherwise Application seems fine.

You don't post/comment on other applications. Only the person marking it is.

I know that's a little hypocritical of me because I'm not going to mark it but yeah, don't post.

[crazily farting teacher]

Edit : Question 1 and 2.
Post Auto-Merged: July 22, 2012, 02:12:34 AM[Edit] I re edited question 2.
Post Auto-Merged: July 22, 2012, 07:44:40 AM

Cindy Whitmore's Civil Authority Application

OOC Name: Epic Panda

IC Character Name: Cindy Whitmore

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
 Cindy was just like the normal City 45 citizen. She would wake up, (Most of the time she would not sleep from raids, lock-downs, ect.) eat a leftover ration, sit outside and watch life go past. Basically the lather, rinse, repeat routine. After she had seen the raids, lock-downs, fights, and sometimes killing for a few weeks she was a spectator of the events.

 After a while it got tiring, she began to watch out her apartment window at the raiding, fighting, and shooting. She got tired of it, she didn't have much heart for some of the CP's but she had to deal with it. As long as she was alive she had to take the 'Civil Protection' for granite. As long as the Civil Protection kept her alive.

 One day she was walking into a shop and tripped a robber that was running out of the store. The CP got there in time to get the 'robber' or as they called them rebels on the ground. The officer granted her a point. Cindy was questionable and she asked what these points do. He explained it to her and she started off to get 4 more of these points. She eventually got 4 more points and she thought back on if she should become apart of the Civil Protection or not. She was only told the good part about being a CP so without thinking twice about the consequences she started off to make a application to join the CCA.


2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Cindy is :

Pure- She will always follow orders and make sure they are carried out.

Cooperative- She will successfully work with any teammate without complaining.

Trustworthy- She is to sure carry out orders and make sure they are done correct.

Brave- She will push her fears away from a fight till she is successful.

Lawful- She will always make sure she does her job but also follow the rules.

Polite- She will respect her higher command.

Obedient- She will follow the rules and listen to objectives without complaining.

Responsible- If she does her job wrong under her command she will blame her trainer (or whoever she is with).

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
 I expect the CCA to be a fun/scary roll in Role Playing. I expect it to be hard (That's because I lag sometimes) and a adventerous experience. I expect it to be exciting, it will definitely be a memorial achivement in Role Playing. I also expect the CCA training a lot different than regular citizen activities.

 For Cindy she expects the CCA to be fun and beneficial. But what she hasn't realized is that it will be hard for her. All the way from training to her ending she will have to endure hard assignments. The CCA wont be as easy as a cake walk for her. The only thing she expects hard is patrolling and multitasking, also raids.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
                                                                             -CHILDHOOD-
 Cindy Whitmore was 5 when she got into kindergarden, she was so smart they made Cindy skip to kindergarden. Cindy was fascinated with books and machinery. She had read 4 learn-to-read book by herself when she was 2. By the time Cindy was 4 she had a huge vocabulary and vast knowledge about machinery and nature. Cindy was a very smart kid. Her parents were constantly bragging about Cindy and her smarts. About the age 11 she was in middle school and was repeatedly got A+ on each report card.

   
                                                                            -TEENAGE'HOOD'-
 By the time Cindy was 16 and she was still very smart but also she was stronger and braver. Her first fight was when she was 17, she was walking through the outside basketball court and bumped into another girl. The girl fell and went ballistic on one little scratch. As the two teens fought the loud heel clomps came around the corner, both battle-worn teens had encountered the principal in front of them. For the first time Cindy had brought shame upon the family. Cindy was suspended, each day Cindy was suspension went by, Cindy would sneak out of her room and talk to her friends through the gate surrounding the 'court' yard. The fight was brutal so only a mere couple of cameras were placed around the school.


                                                                           -ADULT'HOOD'-
 Cindy Whitmore was now 21, as time went on Cindy was knocked out with a piece of rubble beside her head. There was a lump on her head. As the 7 Hour War raged on Cindy was out cold. It was a long time before she woke up. She was surrounded by masked men named Civil Protection, they gave her a blue jumpsuit, a CID number, and a escort to a train. As she was being transported to City 45 she wondered what it looked like and how long was she out.


                                                                             -PRESENT-
 Cindy Whitmore arrived at City 45. She walked past the masked men watching her. She quickly got out, got a apartment, and pieced back her thoughts one by one. As she finished a broadcast came on with a ladyish voice that announced rations. Cindy got her rations and when everyone was in front of the nexus, a huge building that was made by  the combine, the black screen on the nexus had shown a man. The man had greeted everyone. Once it was over everyone went on with they'er normal lives. The robot looking masked men searched some people for reasons Cindy coulden't understand and some were taken into the nexus. After a while Cindy slept, woke up, and repeated the same routine.

5) Have you ever had a CCA character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
No, I have not.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
About 2 to 4 years so I'd say 3

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
About 2 years.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
2 years

4. What Time zone are you in?
U.S. Central Time Zone

5. In what country do you live?
United States

6. How old are you?
11

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
I remember playing Outlands and I spotted a scanner so we kept shoot/throwing rocks at it till it went down, then we took it apart and made a computer out of it. Well I did.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes, I do.


IC Section

Full Name: Cindy Whitmore
CID: 34700
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Height: 6'2
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Blue
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 135
Mental Distinctions: Quick strategizing, remains calm.
Mental Defects: SD- Spatial Disorder.
Mental Advantages: Thinks quickly.
Notable Qualities: Intelligent.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
Yes, once, because I found a empty ammo box and was questioned about it.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes, I do eat the supplied water and food from the CCA.

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes, I am willing to risk/give my life to the Universal Union

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Yes, I do accept that all action preformed by me are under my responsibility.

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Yes, I will always remain loyal to the Universal Union.

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I, Cindy Whitmore wish to join the CCA to help ensure safety among the loyaltist and citizens. I also wish to serve and protect the Universal Union.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Cindy Whitmore hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.

Post Auto-Merged: July 21, 2012, 06:12:23 PM[Edit] I edited question number 2 to give examples of what she will do.

Post Auto-Merged: July 22, 2012, 07:49:52 AM

Question 1, Paragraph 2, Missing a sentence.
Question 2, Two traits are missing descriptions (Doesn't go with the other traits, as they have descriptions.)
 Otherwise Application seems fine.

Actully I was going to fix question 2 till I past out, I knew I was going to pass out so I saved and left.

[Scratchie]

UNIT: 479
DIVISION: UNIFORM
CLEARANCE: DvL
Enter Password: ************

ACCESS GRANTED

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Applicant File Opened: Cindy Whitmore
Citizen Identification Number: 34700

Acceptance status:
<::|| DENIED ||::>

Reason:
<::|| Application does not meet requirements.  Application fails to follow proper grammar requirements.  Application question 1 does not meet minimum standards. ||::>

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