What do you guys think of it? Here's what my thoughts on it are.
Some pieces of erotica literature are well made. They include extensive detail as well as a good prologue. I prefer to read first person stories rather then third due to the fact they are usually one sided. I have only come across two stories that are like this and I hate myself for not remembering where they came from.
There are a few things I don not like about this kind of literature. When people write in first person, if the main character is a virgin for example, they should not be using words such as cunt and cum. They should be using words such as vagina and semen as a virgin is an armature and slang words shouldn't be thought up in their heads yet.
I also found that a lot of people get too excited when writing erotica and skip ut on important details as well as realism. There was one I was reading where a virgin girl found porn under her fathers bed. She watched it and somehow got hooked on sexual activity. She then told her parents who then decided to watch one of these videos with her. Her parents literally had sex with each other right in front of her. They then proceeded to let her join in. Her parents were using the same slang such as fucking and pussy. I found the most unrealistic part was how she passed out, woke up in her own bed, and found her parents having an orgy. She joined in and guess who was the first to have sexual intercourse with her? Her father.
Bottom line is, erotica can be interesting to read when written by the right person. If say a kid was writing it, it tends to be poor literature with a broken storyline and unrealistic scenarios.
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