Carlito Cruise's Authorization Application

[Vegas]

Player Section

Steam Name: vegasGodhead²
Age: 17
How long have you been Roleplaying? (can be any game): 4 Years
How long have you been playing Serious GMod RP?: 3 Years

Character Section

Authorization(s):
*1 broken lead pipe
*Above-average muscle strength (only a bit above a normal person's strength)

Name: Carlito Cruise
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Resistance

Write a detailed in-canon back-story how your character obtained these authorizations.
  Carlito was a man of strength and always was the 'brute' of his gang. He'd been told by another resistance member that 'the rations starve you outta the nutrients'. Listening to the resistance member, he'd always eaten the healthier food of the resistance, chomping down melons, always being the one that ate the most portions during the infrequent meals. He tried to get the most protein-packed foods that he could, only eating rations when it was absolutely necessary, if ever. He'd always get in his exercise, 10-20 pushups, a couple of situps, then do 3-4 pullups. That was his daily exercise, and it normally accompanied mealtimes.

  One day, he was doing some pushups, then his superior, Rick or 'Snoops' told his of a quarrel he had with a man with a black goatee. Carlito then realized, if they were to quarrel, he would need some sort of improvised weapon. He looked around and noticed that next to the hang out were pipes. Snoops then nodded at Carlito, noticing his interest for them. He then muttered, 'Those are loose, you know,'. Carlito nodded to Snoops, walking over to the pipes. He tried them, and to his surprise, they wobbled about a bit. He quickly put his strength to work, using both hands and a couple minutes of work to pry off a pipe. He finally got the pipe free, and nodded to Snoops. 'So, where's the goateed bastard?'

What will these authorizations give your character in regards to perks or defects?
Perks
-A weapon which, used thoroughly, can kill or injure
-The ability to use the weapon effectively (strength)
-Great for beating someone who's downed and can't dodge
-Intimidation
-Over-all strength makes him better in close combat if he can land a hit

Defects
-Slowed by inertia in his swings
-Contraband
-Too big to hide
-Slower, harder to pull off a hit

What do you plan to do with these perks/defects?
Beat up people who disrespect him and his gang.

Will anyone else need these auths? (If so, list OOC and IC name(s))


Which server does this apply for?
City

Extra Notes (optional):

[garry :D]

-support

Barely enough effort put into the creation of the backstory and you seemed very rushed to get me to write my opinion here when you PMed me ingame without so much as a 'please' or 'thank you'.

[Vegas]

I was told it was something simple, so I should only write a paragraph. I did so, and I didn't know being polite to admins was required to get IC things. :|

[Yak]

I can vouch for Vegas getting told he only had to write one paragraph.

[smt]

As far as I'm aware eating "all your rations" would have almost an opposite effect of making you stronger, plus I agree with Oz in saying that this does lack effort considering how much this could effect roleplay.

[Lone Wanderer <??"?]

Also, strength doesn't make the use of a weapon effective. While it does help, it's all about how you use it. Strength will just put more power into the force of your attacks, so you can actually do more damage. Also, yes, rations do not make you stronger in any way shape or form. They do the opposite, and barely keep you alive. They actually slowly starve you of nutrients in a sense.

[Kom????k]

If you still want this application, you have 1 week to fix up the backstory, and make it longer/more detailed.

[Vegas]

Also, strength doesn't make the use of a weapon effective. While it does help, it's all about how you use it. Strength will just put more power into the force of your attacks, so you can actually do more damage.

righto, thats exactly the point
he has more force in his hits from the strength, but he's slow

also, fixed up the backstory, added a paragraph about his eating habits

[Howard Biggs]

-Support
On the grounds of the admins,I have to go with them,Because you story is utterly hopeless,I have read better things then this.

[Kom????k]

Denied, barely any effort was put into making this, even after the 'edit'.