Very unique idea, but I would like clarification on some things if you will.1) Currently, our year is right around 2017, give or take few years. Could you adapt your character to fit this time in our canon?(As a note to the above, I have a feeling you mean 2555 as the year of your characters home planet, please clarify.)Yes, in her universe the current year is 2555 A.D. The reason for the year difference, is not completely understood by Noxis at this point. When it was 2000 in this universe (not exactly dated, so let's use 2000) the Resonance Cascade happened. The rift in the Noxis Universe was open much longer (~300 years or more longer). They currently believe that no universe around theirs had any events causing a tear, which led to the rift looping back in on itself; but when this universe had the Resonance Cascade, there was an opportunity for their universe to connect. The odds of the two universes being close enough for the link to occur, and the odds that both had events that caused it are rare. This is the primary reason of Dr. Shefield's visit, to investigate what this universe is like, how different/similar it is to theirs, and gain other knowledge.2) Based on the assumption of her being an alien life form (alien to human anyways), does she look any different from a human being?She is identical to a human being, as in her universe Humans expanded from the stars (with major help of Noxis) around 2075.3) Please provide some information about where she is from, what it is like there, information on technology there, ect. Anything and everything is good to know.Her official birthplace is not known (she thinks she came originally from Earth but only the Directors know if she was one of the originals or a clone), but there is a high chance the majority of the humans currently residing on the CA station are in fact clones of the ones that were born on Earth, however they do not know this. The CA station is a massive Noxis Built station orbiting Sagittarius A*. There are a couple reasons for it's rather strange locations. The first being that the black hole their is an anchor point for their Gate network. (Following the discovery of a strange new type of particle in Jupiter, Gates were developed over a period of 25 years.) The station is around the size of a small asteroid, and was built mainly by robots. It took around 300 years to complete (In the mean time all of the Noxis Employees were either in Cryo Stasis or cloned once it was finished.) Noxis has some advanced technology in certain fields, but has very low tech in others. In the fields of Inter/Intra Space Dynamics, Physics, Most medical fields, some FTL communication/travel (Communication using entanglement and travel being FuseWarp and Gate travel) and propulsion along with some more advanced forms of life support systems and artificial gravity. They are getting closer to discovering Blue Space energy (Zero Point Energy) but are currently unable to do so. They have very little weaponry past the 21st century as Noxis never developed weapons (There was no need, they never found alien lifeforms while they were expanding, and during their reign humans were united.)4) What interaction has her home world had with the Combine, if any?They currently have never encountered the Combine, as they currently have one known rift. However I have included a recent document from an unknown source regarding a possible second rift. An attached note says "We have found new evidence in space-time disruptions on a massive scale between the Core, and ASA space."Thanks, also, please note that the above questions do not mean this will be accepted- they are simply questions that would need to be answered before it could be considered, if it's not too far fetched.
As much as this seems absolutely great and a lot of effort put in to it, I am afraid that due to people being strict about the canon here, the fact that there is existance of other alien life in the universe besides the Combine(not to mention if they may possibly posses the ability to defeat the Combine more thoroughly than the humans could have during the Seven Hour War) and that they have visited Earth while it is under occupation of the Combine, the chances of that getting denied may be very high. Me personally, I +support, I enjoy good stories and such with much detail put into it. It's just that you may not have much luck getting this accepted.
I've pointed this out to Raiden, and he knows that this one is being left to him and to review it.
Try connecting the whole Noxis story more to the Half Life canon is my suggestion, like maybe explaining how the Noxis universe managed to latch onto the Resonance Cascade, or how it connected to the Resonance Cascade in the Combine controlled universe. Is the Noxis universe connected to Xen through the Resonance Cascade? Remember, Xen is a prominent factor in the portal activity in the Half-Life storyline. Xen is involved in most natural portals. Xen is known to even possibly be what connects all the universes together.And also, try explaining more of this appearent alternate universe(Such as history of the alternate Earth and what not, not just the history of the Noxis corporation)
Ah, ok, thank you. This sounds very similar to what is called the Multiverse Theory, the theory that apart from our own universe exists a number of identical universes, in terms of the laws of physics and everything that exists, all of which may be unique in some sort of way, such as having a different timeline of historic events and such. Of course the timeline part of that was simply suggested by the science fiction community, as we have never been to any other universe besides our own to be able to tell whether the others would be 100% identical or not, like having a different or similar timeline.I would just like to point out one plot hole I managed to find if you are basing this off of the Multiverse Theory, according to the theory, everything physical is identical in every universe. That includes time, or date. As the two universes(Noxis and HL2 universe) are identical, they should be at the same time, in the same year. In our canon here at CG, the HL2 universe time is 2016-2017 A.D., while the Noxis universe time is, according to your character's backstory, 2555 A.D. Unless maybe in the Noxis universe, either Mankind, Earth, the solar system, or the galaxy was formed maybe 539 years earlier than in the HL2 universe, or possibly vice versa. Anyway just wanted to point that out.When mixing the Multiverse Theory with the inter-dimensional science in the HL2 canon, I like to think of it like this:||_______|_______|||The vertical line representing our multiverse, the horizontal representing a dimensional plane of 'other' multiverses, bringing the Combine and their territories into the picture. I like to think of it as each universe of existence being connected to each other through a linear equation. And with that being said, any universe can possibly access any other universe, no matter what multiverse or dimension. This could cause a whole lot of confusing stuff.Say maybe in one Y axis universe, a universe within the multiverse of the X value, and lets say X = The dimension of the Combine(The Combine Homeworld), they invade another X value on the same Y value(if that was too confusing, they invade another dimension in the same Y value, the Y axis indicitating which universe it is in the multiverse), like think of Combine A invading Earth A(Or HL2 universe), they are able to travel to the Earth A universe very easily because it is on the same Y value. Now imagine their inability to travel to a different Y value. I find it very interesting how in Earth B(Or Noxis universe), the connection to a different Y value is natural through the Resonance Cascade that occured there, but then again this could be more easy since it is in the same dimension, or X value.Now getting back to all that X and Y stuff, when finding a dimension, the point should be ( ?, 0) and when finding a universe along the multiverse of that dimension, the point should be ( [an integer], ?).I get the feeling I'm starting to lose you, lol, by now you probably tl;dr'd.Well to just conclude this post already, I really find your story very interesting, and I would really hate to see it get denied. I wish you the best of luck and I am looking forward to see this story develop.