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Connor Davis's Metropolice Force Application
« on: March 02, 2014, 07:20:40 AM »
Connor Davis's Metropolice Force Application

OOC Name: |WOLF| Mongoose

IC Character Name: Connor Davis

1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Metropolice Force and what lead your character to do so.
He wishes to join the Metro Police Force because he wishes to wipe injustice from the fine city.
He wishes to help the Metro Police Force because of a previous experience with law breakers.
Finally, he wishes to join because my character is tired of every day life and was inspired by a poster glued to a vending machine

2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Strong, Athletic, Moderately Tall, Average Weight, Stubborn, 21, Lawful, Martial Arts Expert, Expert Liar.

3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character.
For me I am expecting it to be fun an entertaining, and even thrilling when it comes to a fire fight.
For my character I am expecting it to be a challenge of taking down criminal scum and forcing rebels from the streets, wherever they might be.

4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Connor Davis' life was a peaceful one, he got up, ate breakfast, went to work, ate lunch, finished work, ate tea, went to bed. Then one fateful morning while he was on his way over to work he was dragged the throat into an alleyway, where three people were waiting with revolvers and a knife. The leader of this held the knife to my throat and made a small incision my throat and put a small microchip in it. They said that every time he disobeyed them,  it would give him a 50 volt shock, increasing by 50 every time. If he disobeyed them 10 times then the microchip would explode. Connor Davis, who previously studied Krav Maga, knew what to do about the man with the knife, and expertly disarmed and stabbed the man with the revolver in the leg, then lunged for the other man. The other man with revolver took aim, and he rammed the knife into the barrel of the gun, causing it to backfire and explode into the mans face, killing him. Then first man who was previously holding a knife was shocked and horrified, so Connor Davis slammed into him with a brutal hammer fist to the throat, followed up by a spinning roundhouse kick to the head, knocking him cold. Using his Request Device, he immediately called the Combines to come and do what they please to them. Unfortunately, he forgot about the one with the knife wound in his leg, who had got up. The man Connor Davis had stabbed retrieves the knife and attempt to slice his throat. Caught off guard, Connor barely manages to move out of the path of the knife, take a minor wound to his left shoulder. Connor, in a massive rage, quickly incapacitates him by slamming the mans face against his knee, roundhouse kicking him in the chest and stamping on his kneecap, shattering the bone as he goes down. When the Combines arrive Connor Davis had already gone, arriving at a hospital a short while later, Connor appeared in the hospital, claiming to have gotten too cocky while juggling kitchen knives.

5) Have you ever had a MPF character here at Catalyst Gaming?  If so, explain why it was removed.
I am happy to say i haven't.


OOC Details

1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
175+ hours.

2. How long have you played on serious servers?
35+ hours.

3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
7 months

4. What Time zone are you in?
GMT +0

5. In what country do you live?
Wales

6. How old are you?
15

7. What�s your most memorable quality RP experience?
When I managed to uncover, foil and get away completely undetected a major rebellion in WWII RP.

8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes




IC Section

Full Name: Connor Davis
CID: 86382
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 5
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour: Green
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Weight: 205
Mental Distinctions: None
Mental Defects: Occasionally says out loud whatever he's thinking
Mental Advantages: Quick thinking, smart,
Notable Qualities: Strong, Athletic, Polite.


1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
I am happy to say I have not.

2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes

3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Yes

4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
Entirely

5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Completely

6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I wish to see justice and stop foolish criminals from wrecking havoc among the city.


Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.

I, Connor Davis hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.

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Re: Connor Davis's Metropolice Force Application
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2014, 07:41:22 AM »
Denied for the following reasons:

-The application was very action packed, and didn't give me much of a feel for the backstory of your character, nor was his previous life before the 7 hour war explained.

-A great focus of RP in the MPF is very passive and is not focused on the gun-fights and the action, I think it would be better for you to get more familiar with the server, get a feel for the more relaxed approach of RP, and create another application, going in to further depth with your back story, explaining why he wants to join the MPF.

-Also traits such as an "Expert Liar" don't seem very trustworthy if you were to join the MPF.

Please re-apply no earlier than 07/03/2014 (7th March 2014)


 

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