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Upcoming thing I'm working on.
« on: January 26, 2012, 07:10:11 AM »
Although this message isn't exactly IC, it's a concept for something I will be writing. It's the life of my Officer, pretty much.

Unknown escapes City 14, moving into the outlands.

Unknown joins Lambda, or known as 'The Resistance'.

Unknown becomes Lambda's leader.

An OverWatch team finds the small village Lambda is based in and kills most people there.

Unknown gets captured, brainwashed and tortured.

Unknown becomes S14.CCA-RECRUIT.61709, under observation from SHADOW.

61709 promoted to 04 of WARDEN

61709 promoted to 03 of WARDEN

61709 promoted to 02 of WARDEN

61709 transfered to JURY, Elite Sociostablity

61709 promoted to Officer of JURY

Amputation of Regional Administrator Janet Hoffman.

61709 takes a grenade to his left side. Loses his augments due to blood-loss, receives his Bionics.

JURY Divisional Leader 61528 deemed rogue. He takes half of JURY with him, including Commander 12704 and Officer 91637.

61709 stabs the JURY DvL, instantly killing him. He kills most of the rogue JURY Units himself in a Night attack of their camp.

JURY is wiped out.

Sectorial Command issues 61709 his data-pad. Branded with C14 on the side, it is an advanced holographic projection system integrated with an access to the City Fourteen Database.

61709 is awarded the Golden Cross from the Sectorial Commander. (Same as an Iron Cross/Victoria Cross, Golden Cross - Awarded by the Sectorial Commander for great valor, strength and courage against all odds.)

61709 transfers to SHADOW.

Classified data.

61709 transfers to WARDEN as the rank of Officer.

City 14 Rebellion happens.

Mass-amputation of the City 14 populace. Thousands killed. 61709 is in charge of the operation.

The Sectorial Commander dies. He is buried in the Nexus Basement.

61709 becomes the last remaining Field Command member. He takes charge of City 14.

Districts 3-10 are lost. 300+ CP Casualties. 56 Units remain.

District 2 is lost. Thirty-Four dead. Nexus destroyed.

District 1 is lost. WOFF-81626 is dead. 61709 has a handful of Units left.

 All Units killed in a last stand. 61709 is the last known Unit to be alive.

61709 is captured. All his gear is taken, including his last remaining photo of Lisa.

61709 is released by his past love, one known as "Lisa." All his gear returned, except the photo of Lisa.

Three weeks after release. He kills Lisa out of pure rage.

61709 brutally kills any resistance/citizen he can find.

61709 escapes the City, moving into the Outlands.

61709 is found by a patrolling COTA Squad. He is taken to City 16.

61709 is transfered to Sector Forty Five under the digits 031.

031 becomes APEX Officer.

031 transfers to VOID.

031 regains his augments, all his limbs become bionic. All his emotions are removed.


For now, I'll keep my characters actually name to Unknown because I don't want randoms screaming it out.

Anyways, basic time-line of what the story will be about. This will be a weekend project, so don't expect it to be done for a good few weeks.
« Last Edit: January 26, 2012, 07:46:22 PM by KillmePlz »
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Re: Upcoming thing I'm working on.
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2012, 10:52:12 AM »
 Hope it turns out well but my concerns are.

 -How can a Resistance member be trusted by the Combine Civil Authority? He would've been amputated immediately.

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Re: Upcoming thing I'm working on.
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2012, 04:08:56 PM »
Hmm, my CWU comes from C-14, but he was transfered to C-45.

I'm really looking forward to this, KMP, seems like it'll be an intresting story.
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Re: Upcoming thing I'm working on.
« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2012, 05:46:02 PM »
Really nice, but yea, how can a resistance leader be trusted to be a CCA recruit?
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