Just a bit of feed back.
I like it, however in the beginning it seems a bit lacking. Like the Breen speech thing is okay, but I feel his voice could maybe be altered to match the beginning beat. And I think the wubs might fill it in more if it came in after Gmans part. I know your just a rookie at this and by all means I know not at all how to do this but just what I think. However, the rest I like. Good job, mate.