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CA Thread Archive / Re: Re: <::|| Combine Civil Authority Applications ||::>
« on: July 16, 2011, 10:09:25 PM »
OOC Section
OOC Name: ARCTICWULF
IC Character Name:
Nashlonson McAstermentanimoe
1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
He wishes to become a Civil Protection officer because he only has experience in one thing, keeping the peace. He was a police officer for a short time, but learned many things, and how to deal with them. He learned that just because Earth has a new ruler, doesn't mean there is not any crime. He has witnessed several illegal acts, such as, a citizen passing the barrier into the other half of the city, and told an officer, he did not believe me because he couldn't find the citizen, and let it slide. It's simple things like that he looks out for, it's simple things like that, that must be justified. He is also always serious and alert on the job, and knows how to deal with individual citizens respectively.
He also strongly believes in all the good Breen and Our Benefactors can bring to the world and wishes to protect that, he understands that he is not there to protect the citizens but to protect Civil Order within the city. What lead up to the decision is when my character was being beat down by other citizens in the slums, when three Metropolitan officers came and helped him. Until he was moved to the city, and up to that moment, he was very fascinated and interested in the job and duties the officers carried out, and how they helped other citizens. With Nash knowing how helping these units could be, he wanted to become a part of them, and help others, how they helped him.
He wants to see what it is like to search a citizen for illegal contraband, and to guard a checkpoint. He thinks that making the rounds and clearing out an apartment would be really interesting and a new perspective on what it is like to be on the other side of the law. He wants to distribute rations and tell citizens to "Isolate". Another reason why he wants to join the CCA is because he wants to maintain Civil Order and defend it from resistance.
2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Loyal
Determined
Clever
3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character?
I think that I would really enjoy it because I like to keep things in order. I also think it would support my sense of command and being a part of a chain of command. I think that being an MPF would be a cool experience. I also believe that it would be a big change in the game and make it more interesting and different. It would also give me a different look in the world of half life 2. This also might give me even more of a challenge for me. I also like to feel like I have some power.
Fun, Serious at some moments, Saddening at some moments and maybe even scary. Fun in some moments such as in the MPFs reunite to talk and chat, maybe tell jokes or just tell stories with many twists and ends. Serious at the parts of arresting, inspections and patting down citizens these parts should be serious and ruthless so the MPFs have an image of serious business and no play. Scary at some points because my character is a cold hearted person who doesn’t care so having to see someone executed would be extremely boring for him.
4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Nashlonson was born June 19, 1980. He was born to a family of immigrants from Ireland. When he was 2 years old, his family moved from Ireland to New York City. When he was 7 years old he was able to go to school. He excelled in history and gym classes. When he was 10 his family had accumulated enough money to move to a suburb in New Jersey. There he started school again, and encountered his first love in life, baseball. He was an A student all the way up to high school where he didn't make the baseball team freshman year. His grades began to drop off and he was hanging out with the wrong crowd. When he was a junior, he was kicked out from his high school for assaulting a teacher and fellow students in a fight at the cafeteria. After he was kicked out, he began working at miscellaneous jobs such as loading boxes into trucks, bike messenger, and taxi driving. When he was 18, he signed up for the United States military and joined the paratroopers. He found another thing he excelled at, discipline. When he graduated cadet school, he became an officer at boot camp and spent 3 years training troops. When America went to war with Afghanistan, he chose to be deployed along with his graduating class of soldiers. He spent 2 tours of duty serving in Afghanistan where he received a medal of honor for heroic actions when a roadside bomb went off. He then went in with the invading forces during the Iraq War in 2003. He spent the next year serving in Iraq. When the Portal Storms began, he went back to the United States and spent time working for a private security company in New York. In 2010, a month before the Combine invaded, some criminals killed his parents in New York over a loaf of bread and he decided that people were no longer good. He went overseas to England. When the Combine invaded, he spent the whole 7 hours sitting in his apartment, contemplating suicide. After the Combine secured Earth, he began helping with the reconstruction of the cities.
OOC Details
1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
I have been Rolplaying on Garry’s Mod for about 2 years.
2. How long have you played on serious servers?
For about the last year and a half
3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
So far, One hour, but don’t get me wrong, I’m a very good RPer.
4. What Time zone are you in?
EST, UTC -5 Hours.
5. In what country do you live?
The United States of America.
6. How old are you?
Thirteen years of age.
7. What’s your most memorable quality RP experience?
When I was in a HL2RP situation where I was getting beat up than some Units came over and detained him.
8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes, I do.
IC Section
Full Name:
Nashlonson McAstermentanimoe
CID:
89208
Age:
36 (Assuming the year is 2016)
Gender:
Male
Height:
6’2
Hair Colour
Red
Eye Colour:
Blue
Sexual Orientation:
Strait
Weight:
187 Lbs.
Mental Distinctions:
Clever, hyperactive mind.
Mental Defects:
Amnesia, I cant remember his childhood, all he knows is from a scrapbook my parents made.
Mental Advantages:
Hyperactive mind.
Notable Qualities:
Determined.
1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No.
2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes.
3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Absolutely.
4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
I understand.
5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Until the last breath I ever take.
6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I would like to join because, Firstly i am a very good leader, Secondly i am not very suseptible to being corrupted or bribed, it is not in my nature to be vulgur or violent without some cause of me being angry. I have had a lot of expireience being a leader of groups, clubs, etc. Fourthly if i did not think i was right for the job i wouldnt be making the application.
Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.
Denied. Backstory lacks a huge amount of character development. Innaccuracies regarding the fact that the U.S. military does not generally accept non-high school graduates (the Paratroopers does not and has never.) (7/25/11)
OOC Name: ARCTICWULF
IC Character Name:
Nashlonson McAstermentanimoe
1) Please write a minimum of 3 paragraphs OOC'ly detailing why your character wishes to join the Combine Civil Authority and what lead your character to do so.
He wishes to become a Civil Protection officer because he only has experience in one thing, keeping the peace. He was a police officer for a short time, but learned many things, and how to deal with them. He learned that just because Earth has a new ruler, doesn't mean there is not any crime. He has witnessed several illegal acts, such as, a citizen passing the barrier into the other half of the city, and told an officer, he did not believe me because he couldn't find the citizen, and let it slide. It's simple things like that he looks out for, it's simple things like that, that must be justified. He is also always serious and alert on the job, and knows how to deal with individual citizens respectively.
He also strongly believes in all the good Breen and Our Benefactors can bring to the world and wishes to protect that, he understands that he is not there to protect the citizens but to protect Civil Order within the city. What lead up to the decision is when my character was being beat down by other citizens in the slums, when three Metropolitan officers came and helped him. Until he was moved to the city, and up to that moment, he was very fascinated and interested in the job and duties the officers carried out, and how they helped other citizens. With Nash knowing how helping these units could be, he wanted to become a part of them, and help others, how they helped him.
He wants to see what it is like to search a citizen for illegal contraband, and to guard a checkpoint. He thinks that making the rounds and clearing out an apartment would be really interesting and a new perspective on what it is like to be on the other side of the law. He wants to distribute rations and tell citizens to "Isolate". Another reason why he wants to join the CCA is because he wants to maintain Civil Order and defend it from resistance.
2) Please detail your characters traits. (Eg, Pure, Lawful, Trustworthy)
Loyal
Determined
Clever
3) Please provide 2 paragraphs about what you are expecting the Combine Civil Authority to be like for you and your character?
I think that I would really enjoy it because I like to keep things in order. I also think it would support my sense of command and being a part of a chain of command. I think that being an MPF would be a cool experience. I also believe that it would be a big change in the game and make it more interesting and different. It would also give me a different look in the world of half life 2. This also might give me even more of a challenge for me. I also like to feel like I have some power.
Fun, Serious at some moments, Saddening at some moments and maybe even scary. Fun in some moments such as in the MPFs reunite to talk and chat, maybe tell jokes or just tell stories with many twists and ends. Serious at the parts of arresting, inspections and patting down citizens these parts should be serious and ruthless so the MPFs have an image of serious business and no play. Scary at some points because my character is a cold hearted person who doesn’t care so having to see someone executed would be extremely boring for him.
4) Please provide a detailed back-story from an out-of-character perspective on your applying character. This section must be detailed and consist of a minimum of 300 words.
Nashlonson was born June 19, 1980. He was born to a family of immigrants from Ireland. When he was 2 years old, his family moved from Ireland to New York City. When he was 7 years old he was able to go to school. He excelled in history and gym classes. When he was 10 his family had accumulated enough money to move to a suburb in New Jersey. There he started school again, and encountered his first love in life, baseball. He was an A student all the way up to high school where he didn't make the baseball team freshman year. His grades began to drop off and he was hanging out with the wrong crowd. When he was a junior, he was kicked out from his high school for assaulting a teacher and fellow students in a fight at the cafeteria. After he was kicked out, he began working at miscellaneous jobs such as loading boxes into trucks, bike messenger, and taxi driving. When he was 18, he signed up for the United States military and joined the paratroopers. He found another thing he excelled at, discipline. When he graduated cadet school, he became an officer at boot camp and spent 3 years training troops. When America went to war with Afghanistan, he chose to be deployed along with his graduating class of soldiers. He spent 2 tours of duty serving in Afghanistan where he received a medal of honor for heroic actions when a roadside bomb went off. He then went in with the invading forces during the Iraq War in 2003. He spent the next year serving in Iraq. When the Portal Storms began, he went back to the United States and spent time working for a private security company in New York. In 2010, a month before the Combine invaded, some criminals killed his parents in New York over a loaf of bread and he decided that people were no longer good. He went overseas to England. When the Combine invaded, he spent the whole 7 hours sitting in his apartment, contemplating suicide. After the Combine secured Earth, he began helping with the reconstruction of the cities.
OOC Details
1. How long have you played on role-playing servers in general?
I have been Rolplaying on Garry’s Mod for about 2 years.
2. How long have you played on serious servers?
For about the last year and a half
3. How long have you played on Catalyst Gaming?
So far, One hour, but don’t get me wrong, I’m a very good RPer.
4. What Time zone are you in?
EST, UTC -5 Hours.
5. In what country do you live?
The United States of America.
6. How old are you?
Thirteen years of age.
7. What’s your most memorable quality RP experience?
When I was in a HL2RP situation where I was getting beat up than some Units came over and detained him.
8. Do you consider yourself a good listener?
Yes, I do.
IC Section
Full Name:
Nashlonson McAstermentanimoe
CID:
89208
Age:
36 (Assuming the year is 2016)
Gender:
Male
Height:
6’2
Hair Colour
Red
Eye Colour:
Blue
Sexual Orientation:
Strait
Weight:
187 Lbs.
Mental Distinctions:
Clever, hyperactive mind.
Mental Defects:
Amnesia, I cant remember his childhood, all he knows is from a scrapbook my parents made.
Mental Advantages:
Hyperactive mind.
Notable Qualities:
Determined.
1. Have you ever been detained or apprehended for a Sociostability Infringement before? If so, explain?
No.
2. Do you regularly eat Combine Civil Authority Issued Rations?
Yes.
3. Are you willing to give your life to the cause of the Universal Union?
Absolutely.
4. Do you as a Citizen and future Civil Protection Member accept ALL actions performed by you and those under your command as your OWN responsibility?
I understand.
5. Will you remain loyal and faithful to the Universal Union as long as you live?
Until the last breath I ever take.
6. Why do you want to join the Combine Civil Authority?
I would like to join because, Firstly i am a very good leader, Secondly i am not very suseptible to being corrupted or bribed, it is not in my nature to be vulgur or violent without some cause of me being angry. I have had a lot of expireience being a leader of groups, clubs, etc. Fourthly if i did not think i was right for the job i wouldnt be making the application.
Please sign the attached oath using only blue or black pen.
I, Nashlonson McAstermentanimoe hereby swear my mind, body and soul to the Universal Union forever so long as I draw breath. I do so knowing that my actions will be held accountable to me and solely myself. I also declare my knowledge that as a Member of The Universal Union that I will be required to perform tasks above and beyond as well as perform ANY task ordered to by ANY commanding person(s). I hereby acknowledge the fact that as a Civil Protection Task-force Unit that I will be losing most, if not all, communication and or past relationship with anyone outside of the Universal Union's operational bounds.
[/b]Denied. Backstory lacks a huge amount of character development. Innaccuracies regarding the fact that the U.S. military does not generally accept non-high school graduates (the Paratroopers does not and has never.) (7/25/11)